A cautionary note

Thank you for giving me the opportunity to read your manuscript, prior to its publication. Without doubt, it was a result of great effort and scholarship. Your teachers would be proud. I have marked the pages with some comments you may consider. Regarding language, some people savour big words (also referred to as sesquipedalianism) and complex sentences; some people choke on them. I found myself thumbing through my dictionary to find words I probably should know, but didn’t. To list a few jargon words and phrases: