Expressive richness: a comparison of speech and text as media for revision

Both theory and data suggest that that richer, more informal, and more interactive media should be better suited for handling the more complex, equivocal, and emotional aspects of collaborative tasks. To test this hypothesis, we constructed an experiment in which participants were required to make either written or spoken annotations to a document to help a fictional co-author revise it. We seeded relatively error-free texts with errors of different scope . The results provide strong evidence that a richer -in the sense of a more expressive -medium is especially valuable for the more complex, controversial, and social aspects of a collaborative task. Subjects stated that they preferred to use voice to comment on higher-level issues in a document and to use text to deal with lower-level problems of spelling and grammar. When subjects’ annotation modalities were restricted, using written annotations led them to comment on more local problems in the text, while using speech Icd lhem to comment on higher level concerns. When lhey did use written annotations to comment on global problems, they were less successful than when they used spoken annotations. Finally, when they offered spoken annotations, they were more likely to add features, such as personal pronouns and explanation, that made their comments more equivocal and socially communicative. These results indicate the uses to which systems that provide voice annotation are likely to be put. INTRODUCTION Co-authoring documents is common practice in business, industry, and academia. For collaborative writing to succccd, clear communication between cooperating authors is important at all stages of the writing process. One might think of collaborative writing as a variant of the recursive planning, execution, review and revision that is Permission to copy without fee all or part of this material is granted provided that the copies are not made or distributed for direct commercial advantage, the ACM copyright notice and the title of the publication and its date appear, and notice is given that copying is by permission of the Association for Computing Machinery. To copy otherwise, or to republish, requires a fee and/or specific permission. B 1991 ACM 0.89791.383-3/91/0004/0021 . ..$1 .5(3

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